Another Part of my Prolouge

Lore-West Country

It is said that West Country was built by the very first settlers. Within those settlers was a man who would not constrain himself to religion He was the opitiminy of the freethinking atheist. However he knew that the Children of the Feather and the Darklings were real. He however did not follow either, he thought it to be a cheap attack on the people to get money. This man became Lord Raynor. Who at present is a powerful man in West Country. Within his constraints he has denied the people of West Country the freedom of religion. Legend has it that beneath the ground of a shop that sells potions is a religious union of those who wish to pray to Koros. It is led by none other then Luther Hemmel. These underground religious ceremonies did not last long when Lord Raynor found out about it and sent his guards in to destroy shrines.
Moments after the guards had arrived in the underground temple they took Luther Hemmel in and brought him to Lord Raynor. He was told that he was forgiven for preaching against West Country laws. But if he were to do it again he would be killed on sight.
It is said that it takes a terrible mishap to change a man. But when the Dark Fathers attacked West Country Lord Raynors change only became worse. He singled out people whom he thought partook in the attack. Many of the residents of West Country were sent to dungeons where they were tortured. Among the tortured was a woman named Melea Le Fevre who Lord Raynor claimed to be a mastermind of the Dark Fathers attack. He himself examined her and interviewed her. When he realized that his accusations were right, he listened to her plead. But during her plead he fell for what he vowed never to fall for. He joined the ranks of the Dark Father temple and married Melea who became his Lady.
During their reigning years the Darklings occupied their manor and their minds. He once again killed those who disagreed with him. Leaving only those who worshiped Korous either killed or driven out of town. The small Castle State soon became a colony for the Darklings to use. The king however did not do anything about it since Lord Raynor was his brother’s son.
This left people like Luther Hemmel to become a refugee and he went back to Oolon to tell the Children of the Feather what the Darklings had done. It was then that Luther was told to go to the king for a document called the War Scrolls, which allowed them to declare war on West Country.
And so it was that the Children of the Feather sent their best warriors to the gates of West Country. With Luther Hemmel at the front of the brigade they marched and rode their horses many miles. When they arrived they blew the War Horn. This alerted the guards and the Darklings who had been watching from the tower. Lord Raynor then walked out of his manor and was told to meet Luther Hemmel at the gates. Luther Hemmel then spoketh these words “You dare not suppress our people any longer, from this moment on we are at war with West Country” Lord Raynor read the scrolls signed by the king appalled by his descion. He then spoketh “I will not surrender my land Luther, for you are a horrible human being the Dark Fathers will prevail” and with that he drew his sword and the war began.

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Part of my current Novel: Prolouge

My Prologue-
Fathers of the Storm-The Lore
As narrated by Lord Bezzlemoth to his trusted scribe.

Fragments of the Earth were shatter by Koros, he was angry with men and thought they did not deserve to live any longer. It is said that the reason he was so angry was because he trusted mortals. Yet they betrayed him. One in particular named Horena, promised him her undying love, and promised to bore him a son to rise.
But when she gave birth to a daughter, he became furious and banned them to the woods to be eaten by wolves and bears. However Horena’s brother, Pieas did not take his sisters banishment lightly and started an army to destroy the God. He came upon the Gods temple with 1 thousand men at his mercy. But this was to no avail because the God destroyed the Army with fires and famine. So it became that he hit the Earth with his fist and itd shattered into many pieces. This killed the entire population of Earth. This was the Earth That Was. During this time there was black and there was silence.
Koro’s brother’s Kus found these pieces of the shattered Earth floating in the air of the Heavens and put them back together again, rebuilding the earth as it once was. But to join the many pieces together he used his spit, which created the Seas we know now. There was no more moon, sun or stars. The earth could not be complete without the moon, the sun and the stars.
Koro searched the Heavens for a way to bring the Earth back to it’s original state.
And so it was at this time, he created a group of individuals who would defend the Earth, and his honor. However he did not expect all the men and women he created to worship him he gave them free will.
Because the God of the Skies were not allowed to go down on Earth he had to create a creature for them to worship and in turn this creature would be his messager. Because he was a God of the sky, he created a creature named the Croraven. The Croraven has only been seen by a few selected people.
The Croraven walks on two human feet, he has skin the color of coal. His legs are long and slender, his waist is U shaped, that is to say it curves at the both ends and where his torso begins it’s as if a tower starts and there his neck is lanky and long. His head consists of two eyes as gray as the rain clouds. They are shaped like two half crescent moons. His nose and his mouth are a beak. At his back he has two very large wings which are dark in color but during the night change to a white color. He does speak with a very strange voice, however those who speak to him have gotten used to it. His voice sounds like two voices in one. One high pitched the other low toned.
The people that Kus created to worship him are called the Children of the Feather. They have a temple in which these people live in the far east corner of Oolon. The temple is made from white solid limestone. It is built upon a hill and has many hundreds of steps to get both to and from the temple. The steps become narrow as you make it further up the path. This was done purposely by the Mistry who is the high priest of the Children, it is to teach the climbers to have balance in their life.
Outside of the temple the white limestone is covered with vines, they wrap themselves heading east. There are two very large trees whose tip touch the heavens above are on either side of the Temple. If one were to go to the right they would find a stairwell leading down into the wine seller of the Temple. Here they would find a door made from wood and a simple handle made from metal. Once opened the aroma of sweet wine can be smelt. Members of the Children, place the wine in bottles and place in a crate to have it sent to villages for selling. If one were to go to the left, they would find themselves entering many layers of Corbel Arches leading to the Hemmel gardens. These garden commentate the oldest and most beloved Child of the Feather. His name is Luther Hemmel. In the garden the Garden Fairies are hired to tend to the Hemmel gardens. Here they feed the plants and flowers and make sure that the garden is kept up to perfect standards according to Croraven. Of course they are not part of the Children themselves but have promised to keep anything they hear secret. At the very end of the garden is the a statue of Luther Hemmel.
In the Temple of Croraven itself, the halls are narrow built from a white brick in lined with gold and silver. At the south corner of the temple is the Giving Room. The door is made from emerald crystals and opens from top to bottom. This room is where the general public if they are so inclined give donations to the Temple of Croraven. On the other side of this room is where only the Misry are allowed to enter. The door is ruby and opens from left to right. Once inside the room the Children are enticed by the only created statue of the Croraven. They are encouraged to pray for everything green to grow and everything sick to get better. In all, the temple has 10 rooms some open to the public; others open only to the Children of Feather.
Because Koros’s brother had built an entire temple to himself and to his created being. Koros too built a temple and created a being who he called The Dark Father. Since the Children of the Feather were sworn to protect the Earth. He created a people to destroy His temple lies on in the swamps of the far west corner of Oolon. A thick fog wraps it self around the temple. Only those brave enough to enter the marshes are able to see the large Dark Temple. The temple is made from crushed onyx stones that are blessed by Koros himself. In order to make your way to the temple entrance one must make their way up the crystal stairway. At the top of the stairwell is a man whom the darklings refer to as The Orator of Pain. He is a silent figure speaks only when spoken to by Koros. His eyes glow a deep red when he is speaking. When he is silent his dark hood is black like the nights sky. He never moves from the top of the stairs. It is said that a large alligator roams the water around the temple and every day one of the Darklings feeds the alligator human flesh to keep him happy.
On the day Koros created the Darklings he created a book for the to follow called The Book of Koros. In the book there are rules and tribulations that members of the Dark Temple must oblige to. Like Luther Hemmel the Dark Temple has a man whom they take their orders from his name is Percy Fairgon and he lives with in the deepest and darkest part of the temple. Unlike Hemmel, the Darklings have no need to build a statue in his honor for he is still alive.

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Review of Music of Razors by Cameron Rodgers

I have just completed one of the most boring books ever to grace my eyes. I am surprised that I am alive today to review it because while I was reading it I felt like I was dying. I felt like a bunch of knifes were stabbing me in my eyes. Let me be more specific as to why I felt that this book was like going to the dentist to have your teeth pulled.

Firstly, I would like to say I am going to give a fair review of this book. The best part of this book is Rodgers descriptions he is able to turn a phrase and write fairly well. But it is his story that is boring and dragged out. When I was reading this book I had to go back a few times just to figure out what he was trying to tell a story about. The characters are boring I didn’t care wither they lived or died. I really didn’t care about the characters at all. Usually in a review I would tell you a synopsis of the story but honestly I couldn’t tell you what the entire story was about because it was very forgettable. To be fair there were some chapters that kept my attention but most of the chapters in this 310-page book are dragged out and should have been cut.
I think perhaps this author needs to try again. This book was so boring and drat that I had to read it five pages at a time. I couldn’t suffer much longer than that. Now at the top of this book is a quote by Neil Gaiman that is as follows “A nightmarishly imaginative debut from a writer of real assurance and vision…Cameron Rodger is going to go places” perhaps my favorite author has different taste than I…..the only thing nightmarish about this book is the story. I am surprised I even finished it. Now I do realize that I said mostly bad things about this author. But I honestly believe he does have potential to be a good author, this just wasn’t his time to shine. Maybe collaboration with Neil Gaiman could work for him? Neil Gaiman could be his mentor and guide him to what a good author should be like.

I give this book a 3/10

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The Tonight Show Dealio

Okay so i am sure most of you readers have heard about this thing with Jay Leno coming back to his spot and NBC dickwads kicking Conan O' Brien on his ass basically. So this is my opinion, Conan O' Brien is one of the funniest men alive and the fact that he is being put out because of a dumb ass like Jay Leno really really pisses me off. But what really gets me is the fact that Jay fucking Leno WANTED to retire and then came back they sent Conan and his family to LA for 7 months of nothing. WTF. Fuck those NBC executives They should have said FUCK YOU LENO and let Conan O'Brien take more than a 7 month glory. I think Conan O'Brien could have done wonders for the Tonight show. Well i hope that Jay Leno fails, and goes back to his cars.

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you know what burns my ass?

The fact that i can't post a story because of the stories I write are long and too long for people to want to read my blog. I am going to have to make like a story that is a paragraph long. That way it would be just like reading a paragraph in a blog. But how much could i write in a paragraph. That's why i don't do flash fiction. It seems kinda hard. Wow i am on a strange rant.


But anyway...you will soon see a review for this BORING book i am reading called Music of Razors. It is taking FOREVER.

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Jobs

Hello again folks who read my blog. I havn't had many thoughts to write about lately and i kind am kicking myself for that because enjoy blogging. But i guess that is how it goes perhaps i will get into a grove of doing it everyday. I have more blogs on this then i do on my myspace.

But anyhow...what i wanted to blog about today is jobs. Why the fuck is it so fucking hard to find a job where i am. I apply at 10 different fucking places and none of them call me back and when i call them back, they say "try again tomorrow" fuck that. What do i have to do to get a job? I thought that perhaps my job experience isn't that great that is the reason why they didn't call me or maybe its cuz my last name is close to the bottom of the alphabetical list. I don't know. I guess in this economy jobs are always hard to find.

alright tahts it good bye for now

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